Sometimes the Mist of the Mountains
Country spirit
healer of small hearts
teach the children of Adam
lost in mountain grass
the old ways.
Hold them with folk tale memories
and grandma’s quilts and read them
Whitman when they are young.
Wrapped in fields of wild white Indigo
you wait in blue mist mornings.
Red dirt roads point
the path with dogwoods
and scattered glades
leading to the porch.
Tonight whippoorwills
echo your cry
hickory smoke spreads out
layering the holler
below the Appalachian stars
shooting across a blackberry sky.
November 24, 2007 at 5:55 pm
Rich imagery carrying the message across achieving clarity, speaking loudly. great work!
I wish you well.
~ Jeques
November 25, 2007 at 12:21 am
Thanks for stopping by and the kind comments.
December 2, 2007 at 6:10 pm
In case I didn’t let you know already…I think this poem is off the chart good. I really love your imagery and your language here.
Nochipa
December 2, 2007 at 11:36 pm
I read your comment on the Bridge, but thank you..
…was it accurate for the region?
December 18, 2007 at 4:34 pm
Ohhh…this left me reeling. Wonderful poem. Much needed poem!
December 19, 2007 at 11:47 am
Thanks Pris for stopping by and your much appreciated words!
December 23, 2007 at 12:09 pm
Oh how I love this, especially this:
Tonight whippoorwills
echo your cry
hickory smoke spreads out
layering the holler
below the Appalachian stars
shooting across a blackberry sky
this sings!!!
December 27, 2007 at 12:35 am
thanks for the comments
March 3, 2008 at 7:24 am
You give me hope. The America I knew vicariously through the Beats four decades ago is not dead. There are those who still care, still have the vision. Bless you!
March 3, 2008 at 11:37 am
Vincent
Thank you for the kind thoughts and words.