http://midwestpoet.wordpress.com/2008/02/05/double-angels/ Lest They be Angels in Disguise Wed, 23 Jul 2008 18:05:26 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=MU http://midwestpoet.wordpress.com/2008/02/05/double-angels/#comment-179 Scot Wed, 06 Feb 2008 11:43:10 +0000 http://midwestpoet.wordpress.com/?p=68#comment-179 Narnie Tweaks indeed! Thanks so much for the time spent and the words left. I appreciate it and will take the advice. Narnie
Tweaks indeed! Thanks so much for the time spent and the words left. I appreciate it and will take the advice.

]]> http://midwestpoet.wordpress.com/2008/02/05/double-angels/#comment-177 Narnie Wed, 06 Feb 2008 07:16:23 +0000 http://midwestpoet.wordpress.com/?p=68#comment-177 I read this yesterday... co-incidence, I thought, as I was about to edit a *groan* 3000 word feature on spirituality that had been written by a friend, which is going forward for publication. Your piece had made me smile and nod gently because that is what it is Scot - a gentle acceptance put into a piece that weaves in and out almost unconsciously presenting a mindflow. By comparison the feature was stark, almost aggressive and in no way poetic - both technically and in content. There are iddy biddy tweaks that you might want to make with a detailed edit but I promise you, yours is much more worthy of publication than the other. I read this yesterday… co-incidence, I thought, as I was about to edit a *groan* 3000 word feature on spirituality that had been written by a friend, which is going forward for publication. Your piece had made me smile and nod gently because that is what it is Scot - a gentle acceptance put into a piece that weaves in and out almost unconsciously presenting a mindflow. By comparison the feature was stark, almost aggressive and in no way poetic - both technically and in content. There are iddy biddy tweaks that you might want to make with a detailed edit but I promise you, yours is much more worthy of publication than the other.

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