Feng Shui Haiku
feng shui is when she walks out talking the dog
and the last pack of cigarettes
nine times out of 10
when she says she means it, she
really does mean it.
Be Not Inhospitable to Strangers
Lest They be Angels in Disguise
feng shui is when she walks out talking the dog
and the last pack of cigarettes
nine times out of 10
when she says she means it, she
really does mean it.
February 22, 2008 at 7:44 am
Now here’s what I like about you Scot, only one t, is that you are the real deal. Remember I said I had a rule, never comment haikuschmaiku, well yours ain’t. The move forward with an idea, and attitude, an emotion, a something is projected and radiates out through the concentric circles, and you know me too, i have a tendancy to waffle while i think, now here is my proposition, something, what is it? Its energy created and shaped by you so that as it passes it is given a vibration by the mediating filter of you and then comes out your word hole, if you know what i mean, worm hole effect, anyway, to me, it doesnt matter what it is, it’s just a game of passies on, say from the wondrous miracle of Brautigan via Byron and some other mad fool heard mumbling on a streetcorner, which is to say, hahaha, I never comment dead endhaiku, but yours arent because you Scot are the real deal,
February 22, 2008 at 11:48 am
Great (though I am wondering, as I don’t know talking the dog, do you mean taking the dog, or perhaps it’s just an expression I don’t know, if so, sorry). Love the second one, that 1/10 margin is so right……but do you take your chances (laughing)? Yes, Paul is right……I don’t have the same issue with the concept as he does, I think they can be very beautiful, but the static business, you have avoided that, yours are all in motion, very good.
February 22, 2008 at 11:52 am
Paul
I toyed after I posted this–should it be one time out of ten or nine times out of ten–??????————–that is my question for you.
Re: the comments–coming from you that is a big compliment! I guess I have a style although I like to experiment–BUT when you said you didn’t really comment on haikus–and those in his blog were my first–I took that as a challenge or an inspiration–write some damn haikus that Paul will read–and commnet on—haha…so I guess I did. Thanks.
February 22, 2008 at 11:56 am
Jo–
no not an expression like “donkey years”–(that was a new one for me –had to look that one up :)–
It is just to say–she didn’t leave anything–she even took the dog.
February 22, 2008 at 9:31 pm
Hmm, one or nine? I’m not sure, all I know is then whenever I think she does she doesnt and vice versa, I never catch up to her, fortunately she is merciful.
February 24, 2008 at 10:00 am
9 times out of 10 definitely. Well, at least it is definitely safer for you to presume so or you will hear it a lot, lot more, haha. When a man says no, does he actually mean ‘can’t be bothered’? *sniggers*Hmmmmmm
February 24, 2008 at 2:03 pm
in a word–yes