Together

 

the bamboo flute like a
tai chi breeze drifts through spring grass
softly we make love

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6 Responses to “Together”

  1. Miss Demure Restraint Says:
    March 4, 2008 at 4:20 am

    Oh, if only I could be so eloquent with such brevity and simplicity. In honor of that, I will only say . . .

    This is both beautiful and touching.

    Miss D

  2. johemmant Says:
    March 4, 2008 at 5:37 am

    delectable………

  3. Paul Says:
    March 4, 2008 at 9:07 am

    Sneaky and soft but
    clear and precise too, cool, hai
    koo. . . .

  4. alison Says:
    March 16, 2008 at 12:19 am

    Oh god. How did I miss this one last night…Okay. Now I’m done. ;-) Ali

  5. Scot Says:
    March 16, 2008 at 12:50 am

    haha–just scratching the surface

  6. Cendrine Marrouat Says:
    March 16, 2008 at 4:09 am

    Very original! I like your style.

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