someday you will read
the love letters you have kept
tied with red ribbon
saving a gentle
kiss to pull out when you are
alone and no one
cares about sunday
afternoons and chalk drawings
in the park. it will
be me writing this
lover’s letter disguised as
a haiku sonnet
thinking of you some
sunday remembering me
May 12, 2008 at 1:59 am
lovely….
May 12, 2008 at 5:50 am
Lovely, yes, and clever too, the shifting perspective.
May 12, 2008 at 10:08 am
Thanks for reading Kim
May 12, 2008 at 10:08 am
Jo
Thank You
May 12, 2008 at 10:20 am
beautifully written, lovely evocation of mood
May 12, 2008 at 4:23 pm
i agree. beautiful tone and feel.
May 12, 2008 at 8:45 pm
Juliet
thanks for reading
May 12, 2008 at 8:45 pm
Lissa
May 14, 2008 at 11:21 pm
This is awesome! Really lovely!