(written by Rosanna and Scot Young)
I
could
go on
in vain
w/o words
songs or
sonnets
but
you know
the lyrics
to every song
I sing
you
read them
to me
under
a morning moon
a summer
mountain breeze
a july sun
cutting
through
charcoal clouds
racing to the
east
laying
afternoon
shadows
across my
face
May 23, 2008 at 9:00 pm
Lovely………especially from a July sun. Great collaboration. hope to see more
May 24, 2008 at 1:17 am
we thank you
May 24, 2008 at 6:02 am
Cool. I’d love to know how you write poetry together.
May 24, 2008 at 7:40 am
Scot,
IMO, this is the perfect poem.
It transcends!!
Sarah
May 24, 2008 at 10:40 am
It’s beautiful.
Specially the charcoal clouds racing to the east image. One can see them as one reads.
May 24, 2008 at 11:18 am
ybonsey
we this was the first. she penned the original and we both revised. It went from tell to show. Thanks for asking
May 24, 2008 at 11:20 am
Sarah
Glad to see you here. Something new here is posted about everyday so come back often. We thank you for the kind words. This is the first time we joined together on a poem–so the first post.
May 24, 2008 at 11:21 am
Alexa
If you have a blog, please leave a link next time. Thank you for reading, your comments are appreciated!
May 24, 2008 at 12:19 pm
yep. i agree. splendid collab
May 24, 2008 at 1:14 pm
thanks lissa–
May 25, 2008 at 11:57 am
a great deal of love shines through this poem, somehow not contained in the words but containing the words. this shone out even before learning how it was written
May 25, 2008 at 12:24 pm
vincent
you have a wonderful way of seeing things