sat two stools down
from bukowski
holding up a high-life
he nodded in my direction
downed it
tapped the empty
on the bar
another
I whispered
bartender
tell him I’m a poet
bukowski emptied
another one
tapped it twice
twisted out
his cigarette
went to the john
I leaned in
whatdidhesay
sounding like cagney
& polishing small circles
on the worn bar
he said,
who the hell ain’t

May 30, 2008 at 1:19 am |
Suh-weet, Scott. Very nice. And very true to Bukowski.
May 30, 2008 at 1:34 am |
thanks Rodger– knew you would like this…
May 30, 2008 at 6:48 am |
I find myself very protective of Bukowski, because now he is liberated from mortal life everyone owns him it seems, everyone interprets him and conjures him up from the silent ether.
So in this context (and I am sure I’m not different from all his other fans) I read your poem waiting for a reason to say “No, this is not the Bukowski I know” (having never met him, read only 2 books of his stories).
So I reached the last line and would only want to echo what Rodger said.
May 30, 2008 at 11:47 am |
Thanks for reading Vincent–this seemed fitting. I agree with your take on him.
May 30, 2008 at 12:06 pm |
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May 30, 2008 at 12:47 pm |
Perfect.
May 30, 2008 at 12:51 pm |
loved it. i felt really in the moment like i was sitting there with the narrator and really wanted to know what happened too. then, the ending was perfect.
May 30, 2008 at 12:56 pm |
thanks Jo
May 30, 2008 at 1:00 pm |
Lissa
May 30, 2008 at 1:56 pm |
YES!!! dude. I love it!
May 30, 2008 at 4:47 pm |
Well, as Tom Waits sings, “In the land of the blind/The one-eyed man is king”
Funny, tho, I imagined Bukowski drinking something a little heavier than a “High Life” — just doesn’t seem like a ‘champagne of bottled beer bard to me”
May 30, 2008 at 4:57 pm |
David
it is reported he mostly drank wine–but I saw a picture of him drinking Miller…I suspect at one time or another her drank everything…
May 30, 2008 at 4:57 pm |
C&F
oh yeah, glad to see ya
May 31, 2008 at 11:58 am |
To the point, a little rough around the edges… just the way Charles might have liked it. Loved the double-tap.
May 31, 2008 at 12:32 pm |
thanks bob!
May 31, 2008 at 2:44 pm |
I love it!
May 31, 2008 at 7:52 pm |
Pris
thanks!
May 31, 2008 at 11:25 pm |
I love it too!
Sounds just like Bukowski. Perfect!
June 1, 2008 at 12:02 am |
Thanks Alexa
June 1, 2008 at 9:38 pm |
[...] new poems over at Be Not Inhospitable To Strangers by one of our frequent commenters, Scot Young: A Beer With Bukowski, International Poetry Festival, and Chinatown [...]
June 1, 2008 at 10:56 pm |
Sorry to clutter up your board with those trackbacks, Scot.
June 2, 2008 at 3:49 am |
i had to come back to this one.. its quite empowering, in a weird way. That “Who the hell aint” kinda gives me the push to keep pounding the keys on my laptop…
Well done bro..
June 2, 2008 at 11:08 am |
June 4, 2008 at 6:28 pm |
This Bokowski bloke sounds a lot like Henry Lawson.
An everyman with a voice.
I enjoyed the dual voice in the poem.
You have written a painting. Your words allow us to study a scene and wonder at what is going on beyond the edges of the frame in a similar way to the wonder we have at what the Mona Lisa is not smiling about.
What made Bukowski smile?
Robert
June 4, 2008 at 7:43 pm |
booze & broads–my take anyway