Brautigan and Zen–last of the red hot haikus

Trout Fishing With Brautigan

it is the pull of a
good trout stretching the line taut
right before it snaps

Zen Dawn

the blue butterfly
softly on pure pink petals
brushed by morning light

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10 Responses to Brautigan and Zen–last of the red hot haikus

  1. johemmant says:

    Scot, do you mean taut? Yep, these are both very good. I like how open-ended the first is.

  2. Scot says:

    Yes, I do need an editor–wow. 🙂

  3. enigma says:

    The blue butterfly

  4. Scot says:

    Thanks enigma for the pic link

  5. Narnie says:

    oh crikey Scot… please please please don’t get me liking haiku’s. It wouldn’t be fair. Totally unfair. These are gorgeous.

  6. enigma says:

    No probs Scott, …and i love haiku’s

  7. JO says:

    These are great! Zen Dawn is gorgeous imagery.

  8. Scot says:

    Thanks JO—flipping back and forth from street haikus to nature ones–I like both

  9. poetswhoblog says:

    Zen Dawn is utterly beautiful.

  10. Scot says:

    pwb
    Thanks for the kind words

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