Sleeping on a Concrete Haiku


Sleeping on a Concrete Carpet

one eyed Mac snores in
empty doorways dreaming
of a full bottle meal.




10 Responses to Sleeping on a Concrete Haiku

  1. johemmant says:

    That foot, heartbreaking…….very good writing too, I like how you keep it simple, don’t try to work our emotions, leaving ‘his’ dignity in tact, if that makes sense.

  2. Pris says:

    You have some moving photos of the homeless on your blog. Thanks for keeping us aware of the many needs outside our doors.

  3. Scot says:

    Sad part is–almost of all these people have died. It is a tragedy that is often overlooked.

  4. Scot says:

    Green Poet
    Thanks for stopping in from Scotland!

  5. Paul says:

    full bottle meal, had a few of those, great series going here on the nexus of art, spirit and politics, cool,

  6. Scot says:

    thanks for the comment on this

  7. Narnie says:

    and no matter how much we might be sceptical, what happy dreams he would have with that. Your poetry is non-judgemental, just conveying the vision. Excellent.

  8. Scot says:

    thanks narnie 🙂

  9. A very powerful message indeed! Some people may find this haiku sad. To me, it is quite the contrary. Keep flowing!

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