American Sentence #26

There comes a day when falling down the rabbit hole sometimes hurts like hell.

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8 Responses to American Sentence #26

  1. Sumedh says:

    oh, amazing, truly amazing one. It’s difficult to pack these american ‘uns with such force every time – and this is wonderful.

  2. scot says:

    Thanks Sumedh
    I look at them as a way to generate something else–bits and pieces/notes. Some come out better than others. Some hit on something with a reader–some do not. Thanks for stopping in.

  3. whypaisley says:

    and crawling out seems like such a waste of time….

  4. Scot says:

    paisley
    sometimes it is–I sspect there is a certain comfort there

  5. kimtblogger says:

    rabbit holes remind me of what happened to Alice when she fell down a rabbit hole… terrific

  6. Vincent says:

    I know that these things have to have 17 syllables, as this one does. But it seemed to me that the word “sometimes” was put in as a make-weight, to provide the needed 2 extra ones. take it out and the meaning is even clearer. I’m being so picky. Feel free to delete this one.

  7. Scot says:

    Vincent
    appreciate your comments no matter what–and “sometimes” you are right

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