haiku winter

winter sun shoots
low through half-naked trees
a morning laser

7 Responses to haiku winter

  1. David Rheins says:

    nice to see you writing haiku again. nice.

  2. Julie says:

    Sweet image…a morning laser. I love your haiku.

  3. Christine says:

    Nice to see a laser in a haiku. Nice mix of traditional elements with a references to modern technology.

  4. maurie says:

    beautiful piece, like it .

  5. Holly D says:

    this reminds me of when I lived in the Appalachian mountains in North Carolina

  6. S.L. Corsua says:

    Ditto to Christine’s comment. The laser line reeled me in. 😉 Really makes me think of the evolution of haiku.

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