gone haiku

i thought you were
in it for the long haul not
a one hit wonder

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5 Responses to gone haiku

  1. This hit me as caustic, but justifiably so. A piece of hurt in seventeen syllables. Good work.

    -Nicole

  2. maurie says:

    It certainly has the ability to Hurt , but does also offer the opportunity to re-committ.

  3. christine says:

    Who is the “you” in the poem? It sounds like the narrator is disappointed.

  4. Holly D says:

    Oh, I have had lots of “one hit wonder”s! What a perfect phrase for it. At least it was good while it lasted.

  5. Julie says:

    Beautiful. I am so impressed with your haiku (another thing I can’t do). Excellent work.

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