she told me sometimes indians are better than stars

first blow job at 13
all the way

two weeks later
with her brother’s friend

hanging off the seat
of a LTD top down

looking up counting
stars

how i wonder where you are

until it was over

last night’s
appointment

john from cleveland
likes to play

cowboys & indians
staring at the ceiling

tiles
counting perforations

one little
two little
three little…

until it was over

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7 Responses to she told me sometimes indians are better than stars

  1. malcolmjames says:

    How delightful!

  2. David Rheins says:

    at least you weren’t counting sheep 🙂

    well done.

  3. whypaisley says:

    something about women and the “will ya just do this already ” train of thought in the air this week… been there myself this week… on paper of course… just on paper….

  4. johemmant says:

    Depressing (though well done). I feel for this girl.

  5. Dick says:

    Superb. Tight and economical to the point of terseness, but packing a mighty punch.

  6. malablogger says:

    gosh what a pitch, guys have all the luck.

  7. as do I, Johemmant. The ennui and despair are palpable. Excellent write, Scot. What I miss when I’m away for too long…

    -Nicole

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