First Post

May 3, 2008

This may have been my first post but thought I would repost it for any comments since at that time there were few hits on this blog.
It is an older poem written in 1988-89.


Watercolor–The Color of Zen

January 25, 2008

Well, the middle of Watercolor (scroll down) was a bit off–maybe difficult as was said. It was awkward without obvious help. The first stanza was Zen-like–well close to it. You can see the omissions and additions. Does it work? What is Zen? Like the masters say, if I explain it–it isn’t Zen. so, the real question…is this poem any better for it?  I can say that read aloud–it has a better flow…