been watching her
for an hour
other end of the bar
stripper tits
blouse tied underneath
i caught her looking
bedroom eye lashes
like pulling down
the shades
new guy walks in
buys her a drink
sits down
i moved closer
she lit a cigarette
told the new guy
through a cloud of smoke
that the lousy
sonofabitch she had last
night couldn’t keep up
she wanted a man
to go all night
knowwhatimsayin
who wasn’t afraid to give
a woman what she wants
knowwhatimsayin
holding a full beer
he looked over at me
i shrugged
looked at the clock
knowing
it was still early
and i was closest
to the door…
Ha! Ha! I love a poem that makes me laugh. Good one, Scot.
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This is goooood. I want to go to strip clubs. Now I have a reason — fodder for poems.
No. I am not kidding. I’m so there. This will give me something to do tomorrow.
Gosh, what a poem , makes you want hit the clubs and bars bigtime / wow.**
I love it!! And yes, perfect ending!:-)
This made me laugh, a lot.
exquisite piece